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		<title>By: Freelance Writing Jobs &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Holiday Weekend Link Love</title>
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		<dc:creator>Freelance Writing Jobs &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Holiday Weekend Link Love</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 May 2008 22:10:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Star</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/are-you-writing-website-content-that-turns-readers-off/comment-page-1#comment-9333</link>
		<dc:creator>Star</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 May 2008 16:21:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am sticking with &quot;Let&#039;s talk.&quot; Good--not many will steal it...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am sticking with &#8220;Let&#8217;s talk.&#8221; Good&#8211;not many will steal it&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Freewheeling Among Freelance Jobs &#124; Freelance Work at Home &#124; Moon Gap</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/are-you-writing-website-content-that-turns-readers-off/comment-page-1#comment-9331</link>
		<dc:creator>Freewheeling Among Freelance Jobs &#124; Freelance Work at Home &#124; Moon Gap</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 May 2008 15:35:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] site construction and are unable to generate content by themselves. Freelance writers can write the content for the website theyâ€™re building. Writers can also have different specialties, such as copywriting, resume [...]</description>
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		<title>By: The Freelance Writer's Blog</title>
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		<dc:creator>The Freelance Writer's Blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 May 2008 19:10:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You know James, this article can be summed up in what I term getting &quot;warm fuzzines,&quot; as opposed to &quot;cold pricklies.&quot; 

Positing language emits the latter, negative language the former. It&#039;s an intangible I think a lot of copywriters don&#039;t give enough credence to (I fully include myself in that crew).

Interesting approach to a &quot;soft writing skill&quot; most are unaware of.

Yuwanda

&lt;em&gt;The Freelance Writer&#039;s Blog&#039;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&#039;http://inkwelleditorial.blogspot.com/2008/05/how-one-new-freelance-writer-netted.html&#039; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;How One New Freelance Writer Netted Enough Clients to Quit His Job in Just 12 Hours&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You know James, this article can be summed up in what I term getting &#8220;warm fuzzines,&#8221; as opposed to &#8220;cold pricklies.&#8221; </p>
<p>Positing language emits the latter, negative language the former. It&#8217;s an intangible I think a lot of copywriters don&#8217;t give enough credence to (I fully include myself in that crew).</p>
<p>Interesting approach to a &#8220;soft writing skill&#8221; most are unaware of.</p>
<p>Yuwanda</p>
<p><em>The Freelance Writer&#8217;s Blog&#8217;s last blog post..<a href='http://inkwelleditorial.blogspot.com/2008/05/how-one-new-freelance-writer-netted.html' rel="nofollow">How One New Freelance Writer Netted Enough Clients to Quit His Job in Just 12 Hours</a></em></p>
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		<title>By: James</title>
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		<dc:creator>James</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 May 2008 16:38:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ Star - It may be clichÃ©, but it&#039;s professional and appeals to a wide audience.

&quot;Let&#039;s talk&quot; is too casual and doesn&#039;t sound professional - also, what if the client doesn&#039;t want to talk? What about email or IM?  &quot;Let&#039;s talk&quot; is also one of my least preferred phrases as a Canadian - it puts me off from the start and comes off as pushy. 

&quot;Give me a call or drop me some electrons&quot; would immediately signal a casual attitude and someone who doesn&#039;t take work seriously. I don&#039;t recommend this either.

The important thing is to remember that if you&#039;re writing for someone else, you want to always - ALWAYS - convey professionalism. If I hired someone who wrote content like that for me, the person would find the work landing right back on the desk for a revision.

(Even worse on the list of no-no in communication is &quot;Let&#039;s do it!!&quot;  Um, no. I ain&#039;t doin&#039; you, buddy.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ Star &#8211; It may be clichÃ©, but it&#8217;s professional and appeals to a wide audience.</p>
<p>&#8220;Let&#8217;s talk&#8221; is too casual and doesn&#8217;t sound professional &#8211; also, what if the client doesn&#8217;t want to talk? What about email or IM?  &#8220;Let&#8217;s talk&#8221; is also one of my least preferred phrases as a Canadian &#8211; it puts me off from the start and comes off as pushy. </p>
<p>&#8220;Give me a call or drop me some electrons&#8221; would immediately signal a casual attitude and someone who doesn&#8217;t take work seriously. I don&#8217;t recommend this either.</p>
<p>The important thing is to remember that if you&#8217;re writing for someone else, you want to always &#8211; ALWAYS &#8211; convey professionalism. If I hired someone who wrote content like that for me, the person would find the work landing right back on the desk for a revision.</p>
<p>(Even worse on the list of no-no in communication is &#8220;Let&#8217;s do it!!&#8221;  Um, no. I ain&#8217;t doin&#8217; you, buddy.)</p>
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		<title>By: Star</title>
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		<dc:creator>Star</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 May 2008 16:33:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Please feel free to contact me.&quot; To me, even though this is positive, it&#039;s kind of a weak cliche. Why wouldn&#039;t they be free to contact you? Always ask for that order: &quot;Give me a call or drop me some electrons--now, while you are thinking of it.&quot;

Something anyhow! I end with &quot;Let&#039;s talk.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Please feel free to contact me.&#8221; To me, even though this is positive, it&#8217;s kind of a weak cliche. Why wouldn&#8217;t they be free to contact you? Always ask for that order: &#8220;Give me a call or drop me some electrons&#8211;now, while you are thinking of it.&#8221;</p>
<p>Something anyhow! I end with &#8220;Let&#8217;s talk.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Links for 21-05-2008 &#124; Velcro City Tourist Board</title>
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		<dc:creator>Links for 21-05-2008 &#124; Velcro City Tourist Board</dc:creator>
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		<title>By: James</title>
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		<dc:creator>James</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 May 2008 02:06:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ Ruben - Ah, thank you so much for that. I checked them all and half weren&#039;t working, so I appreciate the heads up.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ Ruben &#8211; Ah, thank you so much for that. I checked them all and half weren&#8217;t working, so I appreciate the heads up.</p>
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		<title>By: Ruben Alfonsin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ruben Alfonsin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 May 2008 02:03:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi
Great series
I should read all of them again

Note the link to &quot;the right questions to ask buyers&quot; is not working

bye
Ruben</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi<br />
Great series<br />
I should read all of them again</p>
<p>Note the link to &#8220;the right questions to ask buyers&#8221; is not working</p>
<p>bye<br />
Ruben</p>
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		<title>By: Brett Legree</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brett Legree</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 May 2008 23:32:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Harry,

That was totally me today, actually.  I needed to modify an image at work, I was using The GIMP because work is too cheap to buy me a proper graphics package... I could have read the instructions on how to do a gradient fill - nah!

*poke poke* ta-da!

@John &amp; Harry,

That&#039;s just it.  James knows this stuff cold, you can see it.  I&#039;ve had to go back and re-read the older posts as there is a lot of rich material here.  *very* good stuff, James.

@James,

Thank you, my friend, that&#039;s a really nice compliment.  I find it much easier to tell stories than write how-to&#039;s - the stories just sort of come to me.  I was going to write something else (still will be doing it shortly), but that one just jumped out of my mind and onto the page.  I had to write it.

I appreciate that very much - thanks for the encouragement.

&lt;em&gt;Brett Legree&#039;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&#039;http://feeds.feedburner.com/~r/6weeksca/~3/294123903/&#039; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;the forever people.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Harry,</p>
<p>That was totally me today, actually.  I needed to modify an image at work, I was using The GIMP because work is too cheap to buy me a proper graphics package&#8230; I could have read the instructions on how to do a gradient fill &#8211; nah!</p>
<p>*poke poke* ta-da!</p>
<p>@John &amp; Harry,</p>
<p>That&#8217;s just it.  James knows this stuff cold, you can see it.  I&#8217;ve had to go back and re-read the older posts as there is a lot of rich material here.  *very* good stuff, James.</p>
<p>@James,</p>
<p>Thank you, my friend, that&#8217;s a really nice compliment.  I find it much easier to tell stories than write how-to&#8217;s &#8211; the stories just sort of come to me.  I was going to write something else (still will be doing it shortly), but that one just jumped out of my mind and onto the page.  I had to write it.</p>
<p>I appreciate that very much &#8211; thanks for the encouragement.</p>
<p><em>Brett Legree&#8217;s last blog post..<a href='http://feeds.feedburner.com/~r/6weeksca/~3/294123903/' rel="nofollow">the forever people.</a></em></p>
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