So he clearly has the ability to write well. Perhaps the about page just needs a bit of a makeover?

Good hit as always. I agree about the size of everything (go bigger) and the need for some differentiation to move the eye along. One thing to add. Linas’ English is excellent, and in a regular blog post there’s no problem with an occasional grammar slip caused by the language barrier, but for the static pages, try to have a native English speaker edit them, because little mistakes are easy to miss. On the About page I noticed that the word “carrier” had been used for “career,” and there were a few other errors that were less serious. That’s the likely cause of the tagline problem, also.

As Linus points out in one post, just write and don’t worry so much is good advice for blogging, but for the static sections, an international blogger needs to take special care to be clear—to maintain the professionalism he’s going for.

(Oh, and LOL at “Whack!” Not what I thought of, but I kind of see it now….)

Regards,

Kelly

As always, you are great in your reviews!

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