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	<title>Comments on: Fiction Writing: Flaw Your Character</title>
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		<title>By: Dungeonmum</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/fiction-writing-flaw-your-character/#comment-35300</link>
		<dc:creator>Dungeonmum</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Jul 2010 21:52:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I know I&#039;ve joined the party 2 years late but I just wanted to say this is a great article, it really got me thinking about my characters. In our main D&amp;D game my husband&#039;s character is the most striking, he rolled a 4 and decided to put it on strength. So what he ended up with is a wizard with a hormone problem who failed to go through puberty. He&#039;s got an incredibly cruel streak in him as well and this &#039;flaw&#039; has engineered a lot of personality traits that make him interesting.

I&#039;m towards the end of the first draft of my novel and you&#039;ve got me thinking about the protag. He hasn&#039;t got any particular flaws but he&#039;s not that brilliant either, could being simply very ordinary compared to those around him be a flaw or just make him dull? Oh well, there&#039;s always the rewrite . . .</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I know I&#8217;ve joined the party 2 years late but I just wanted to say this is a great article, it really got me thinking about my characters. In our main D&amp;D game my husband&#8217;s character is the most striking, he rolled a 4 and decided to put it on strength. So what he ended up with is a wizard with a hormone problem who failed to go through puberty. He&#8217;s got an incredibly cruel streak in him as well and this &#8216;flaw&#8217; has engineered a lot of personality traits that make him interesting.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m towards the end of the first draft of my novel and you&#8217;ve got me thinking about the protag. He hasn&#8217;t got any particular flaws but he&#8217;s not that brilliant either, could being simply very ordinary compared to those around him be a flaw or just make him dull? Oh well, there&#8217;s always the rewrite . . .</p>
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		<title>By: Characters who grow and have flaws</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/fiction-writing-flaw-your-character/#comment-7045</link>
		<dc:creator>Characters who grow and have flaws</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Apr 2008 13:11:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] mentioned there would be more character tips to come. True to their word, the latest post is about making your character flawed, and it&#8217;s another timely reminder as I prepare to sit down with my opening chapter this [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] mentioned there would be more character tips to come. True to their word, the latest post is about making your character flawed, and it&#8217;s another timely reminder as I prepare to sit down with my opening chapter this [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Harry</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/fiction-writing-flaw-your-character/#comment-3312</link>
		<dc:creator>Harry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Mar 2008 22:23:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Jay: Now that&#039;s what I like to hear! Thanks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Jay: Now that&#8217;s what I like to hear! Thanks.</p>
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		<title>By: Jay W. A. Ruckart</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/fiction-writing-flaw-your-character/#comment-3309</link>
		<dc:creator>Jay W. A. Ruckart</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Mar 2008 22:13:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Harry did a nice job on this piece.  He has led me in the direction I was already moving in but with greater conviction and bravado. Thank you, Harry.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Harry did a nice job on this piece.  He has led me in the direction I was already moving in but with greater conviction and bravado. Thank you, Harry.</p>
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		<title>By: Harry</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/fiction-writing-flaw-your-character/#comment-3166</link>
		<dc:creator>Harry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Mar 2008 06:13:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Jaden: Oh, I won&#039;t cry, I&#039;d rather join you in watching some of those shows.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Jaden: Oh, I won&#8217;t cry, I&#8217;d rather join you in watching some of those shows.</p>
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		<title>By: Jaden @ Screenwriting for Hollywood</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/fiction-writing-flaw-your-character/#comment-3165</link>
		<dc:creator>Jaden @ Screenwriting for Hollywood</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Mar 2008 05:00:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Harry,  My story would kick your story&#039;s buttocks.  --Just pulling your chain with my competitive spirit!-- I&#039;m an honest gal; I announce before grabbing cookies out of the jar. &quot;Mommy, I&#039;m taking a cookie.&quot; &quot;Ok, honey.&quot;

Twilight Zone is a childhood favorite of mine. I used to watch that, Amazing Stories, and Alfred Hitchcock Presents. Those were the days of good TV!!! That and Three&#039;s Company and Looney Tunes. Latchkey kid here. Don&#039;t go crying for me LV.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Harry,  My story would kick your story&#8217;s buttocks.  &#8211;Just pulling your chain with my competitive spirit!&#8211; I&#8217;m an honest gal; I announce before grabbing cookies out of the jar. &#8220;Mommy, I&#8217;m taking a cookie.&#8221; &#8220;Ok, honey.&#8221;</p>
<p>Twilight Zone is a childhood favorite of mine. I used to watch that, Amazing Stories, and Alfred Hitchcock Presents. Those were the days of good TV!!! That and Three&#8217;s Company and Looney Tunes. Latchkey kid here. Don&#8217;t go crying for me LV.</p>
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		<title>By: Harry</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/fiction-writing-flaw-your-character/#comment-3163</link>
		<dc:creator>Harry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Mar 2008 01:51:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Jaden: Very Twilight Zone. If you write a screenplay about it, give me a place in the credits somewhere - unless I beat you to it and write a novel about it first  ;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Jaden: Very Twilight Zone. If you write a screenplay about it, give me a place in the credits somewhere &#8211; unless I beat you to it and write a novel about it first  <img src='http://menwithpens.ca/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Jaden @ Screenwriting for Hollywood</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jaden @ Screenwriting for Hollywood</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Mar 2008 01:43:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;I&#039;d hate to think of what my characters would write for me should the tables be turned. Hmmm...there&#039;s a premise in that...&quot; -- Harry

That&#039;s a really funny thought. Gets a bit psychedelic. Not sure my brain can handle it right now after all the ice cream and carmel corn I just ate. Gosh, now my brain is running wild with ideas. Good one.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;I&#8217;d hate to think of what my characters would write for me should the tables be turned. Hmmm&#8230;there&#8217;s a premise in that&#8230;&#8221; &#8212; Harry</p>
<p>That&#8217;s a really funny thought. Gets a bit psychedelic. Not sure my brain can handle it right now after all the ice cream and carmel corn I just ate. Gosh, now my brain is running wild with ideas. Good one.</p>
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		<title>By: Harry</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/fiction-writing-flaw-your-character/#comment-3161</link>
		<dc:creator>Harry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Mar 2008 23:49:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Jaden: It&#039;s so true, I&#039;ve seen some movies that were real dogs, but I still watch them because I love the characters. I&#039;ve never seen the Motorcycle Diaries, maybe I&#039;ll have to check that out.

Research is essential. I guess I&#039;m lucky in that respect. I&#039;ve done a lot of different things and have always had this thirst for knowledge that helps. Unless I&#039;ve experienced it or researched it to death, I&#039;m not going to use it.

Becoming your character is an interesting feeling. Although many of my characters are based on aspects of myself, I know they&#039;ve gone beyond that when I write a reaction that seems to have come from nowhere. It is creepy - and exciting at the same time. I agree, the &quot;bad&quot; things are often the most fun. 

Well, for the writer anyway. I&#039;d hate to think of what my characters would write for me should the tables be turned. Hmmm...there&#039;s a premise in that...

Go ahead and elaborate wherever you like, just point me in the right direction when you do and I&#039;ll be sure to go read it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Jaden: It&#8217;s so true, I&#8217;ve seen some movies that were real dogs, but I still watch them because I love the characters. I&#8217;ve never seen the Motorcycle Diaries, maybe I&#8217;ll have to check that out.</p>
<p>Research is essential. I guess I&#8217;m lucky in that respect. I&#8217;ve done a lot of different things and have always had this thirst for knowledge that helps. Unless I&#8217;ve experienced it or researched it to death, I&#8217;m not going to use it.</p>
<p>Becoming your character is an interesting feeling. Although many of my characters are based on aspects of myself, I know they&#8217;ve gone beyond that when I write a reaction that seems to have come from nowhere. It is creepy &#8211; and exciting at the same time. I agree, the &#8220;bad&#8221; things are often the most fun. </p>
<p>Well, for the writer anyway. I&#8217;d hate to think of what my characters would write for me should the tables be turned. Hmmm&#8230;there&#8217;s a premise in that&#8230;</p>
<p>Go ahead and elaborate wherever you like, just point me in the right direction when you do and I&#8217;ll be sure to go read it!</p>
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		<title>By: Jaden @ Screenwriting for Hollywood</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/fiction-writing-flaw-your-character/#comment-3160</link>
		<dc:creator>Jaden @ Screenwriting for Hollywood</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Mar 2008 23:27:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Whoa! Much to say -- YES YES YES.

Characters are definitely a driving force. A good screenwriter adds flaws and ticks to make the character believable. I love lots of the old James Bond movies because he was always tripping and having embarrassing accidents, especially in front of sexy women, that made him believable as a person. For me, movies, actors, directors, and screenwriters fail when characters don&#039;t have flaws, when lines are delivered flatly and nothing makes the dialog real. 

It is easier to watch a plotless movie with great characters, than to watch a great plot with boring unbelievable characters.

&quot;the character is so perfect you canâ€™t stand it?&quot; 
Yes. I love the movie Motorcycle Diaries, but the written character of Che didn&#039;t have any of the anger and fire that the real Che would have had in the real life situations. It was my only reproach to the movie.

Story arch and character growth are ESSENTIAL to a successful screenplay. It is noted in every screenwriting book.

Research your characters. Nothing is worse than unbelievable characters.

Your characters come to life when you fill them up with the tiny details of their life.

&quot;become the character&quot;
To me, this is the difference between professional creative writers and the masses. Only in the last few years after some personal traumatic experiences was I able to make the leap out of my own skin and into fully fictional characters. Before this, it was all me, me, me, which was boring. Now, it is really exciting as a writer to be able to fully separate myself from a character. It&#039;s really fun and gets a little creepy sometimes. My co-writer and I find ourselves doing bad (fun) things we created for a characters. Eek. Now, my characters inspire me!

--RLD: Excellent points. Thanks for saying.
--Hunter: I agree re BY
--The SIMPSONS is the best fiction scripted show ever, in my book. I will do a feature post on that based on a panel discussion with the writers that I had the honor of attending.

So much to say! Aaaaah.

Inspirational post. I will be elaborating on such things back at my site (or here?!) soon.
Thanks!

&lt;em&gt;Jaden @ Screenwriting for Hollywood&#039;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&#039;http://www.screenwritingforhollywood.com/interviews/interview-with-student-actor-kari-lane&#039; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Interview with Student Actor Kari Lane&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Whoa! Much to say &#8212; YES YES YES.</p>
<p>Characters are definitely a driving force. A good screenwriter adds flaws and ticks to make the character believable. I love lots of the old James Bond movies because he was always tripping and having embarrassing accidents, especially in front of sexy women, that made him believable as a person. For me, movies, actors, directors, and screenwriters fail when characters don&#8217;t have flaws, when lines are delivered flatly and nothing makes the dialog real. </p>
<p>It is easier to watch a plotless movie with great characters, than to watch a great plot with boring unbelievable characters.</p>
<p>&#8220;the character is so perfect you canâ€™t stand it?&#8221;<br />
Yes. I love the movie Motorcycle Diaries, but the written character of Che didn&#8217;t have any of the anger and fire that the real Che would have had in the real life situations. It was my only reproach to the movie.</p>
<p>Story arch and character growth are ESSENTIAL to a successful screenplay. It is noted in every screenwriting book.</p>
<p>Research your characters. Nothing is worse than unbelievable characters.</p>
<p>Your characters come to life when you fill them up with the tiny details of their life.</p>
<p>&#8220;become the character&#8221;<br />
To me, this is the difference between professional creative writers and the masses. Only in the last few years after some personal traumatic experiences was I able to make the leap out of my own skin and into fully fictional characters. Before this, it was all me, me, me, which was boring. Now, it is really exciting as a writer to be able to fully separate myself from a character. It&#8217;s really fun and gets a little creepy sometimes. My co-writer and I find ourselves doing bad (fun) things we created for a characters. Eek. Now, my characters inspire me!</p>
<p>&#8211;RLD: Excellent points. Thanks for saying.<br />
&#8211;Hunter: I agree re BY<br />
&#8211;The SIMPSONS is the best fiction scripted show ever, in my book. I will do a feature post on that based on a panel discussion with the writers that I had the honor of attending.</p>
<p>So much to say! Aaaaah.</p>
<p>Inspirational post. I will be elaborating on such things back at my site (or here?!) soon.<br />
Thanks!</p>
<p><em>Jaden @ Screenwriting for Hollywood&#8217;s last blog post..<a href='http://www.screenwritingforhollywood.com/interviews/interview-with-student-actor-kari-lane' rel="nofollow">Interview with Student Actor Kari Lane</a></em></p>
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