Comments on: Fiction Writing: Hurt Your Characters

By: Maysol

Maysol — Sat, 27 Aug 2011 00:59:53 +0000

I love torturing my characters! On my creative writing roleplay site, most of us very much enjoy putting our characters in dillemnas and showing them in unattractive lights. We love to feel their pain which is deep and meaningful, and it really does cause us to care about everyone’s characters way more than if they were merely an object of perfection and fanservice.

My friend and I are currently working on the first draft of a novel we sincerely hope to get published. We’ve dreamt up a crazily hopeless scenario that we are stumped for a solution too – we honestly don’t know if our characters are capable of surviving it, so we are going to have to find out. Such is one of the greatest thrills of writing. C:

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By: Larry Brooks

Larry Brooks — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 22:38:58 +0000

Another way to think about hurting your characters... is to threaten their hope. Their hope for survival, their hope for love, their hope for money, their hope for happiness. The central issue of dramatic fiction has and always will be stakes. At any given moment we as authors need to ask ourselves, "what's at stake for this character, and what is threatening whatever is at stake?" All things spring from that question, because the decisions and actions that a character takes in response to the threat, the opposition, or the chance that their hope(s) will be dashed, is the essence of story, the stuff of character arc. Hurt them? Have at it. Threaten them, even better. Put their hope up for grabs, though, in context to the pain, and now you've got something to work with. Larry Brooks´s last blog post...Writing Better Fiction: Inside the Six Core Competencies

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Brad’s Reader » Blog Archive » Friday Link Love 3/21 — Sun, 17 May 2009 20:25:35 +0000

[...] Fiction Writing: Hurt Your CharactersThere’s an old saying "No pain, no gain" (or something like that). Yet many writers are afraid to send their characters to the depths of hell and back. Okay, you probably don’t have to go that far. But as this post points out, hurting your beloved characters a little can be a good thing. [...]

By: AdahLael

AdahLael — Tue, 28 Apr 2009 17:00:03 +0000

Thank you sir James! I stumbled across this post on the sidebar, after finding your blog hunting around after “selling e-books” or some such on Google. And I laughed like a mean bad-guy! Mua-ha-ha-ha-ha! I have found another one! Another writer who knows how to make a story actually tick, combating the scourge of the boring book, who is improving the writing community one on-line writing lesson at a time!

I just started a little website with that goal in mind: to put out there everything I know and have learned about writing for free, just because I feel like it (http://www.biggsbooks.net/lessons.html). Your title is a lot better than mine. Hurt your characters. Yah. Darn, I should have thought of that. I’m probably going to set up a “good links” section and I’ll have to link to this page.

By: James

James — Tue, 02 Sep 2008 17:08:36 +0000

@ B-chan – Well, we don’t go around spreading gratuitous violence just to beat our characters up… but trauma’s good for the soul. Never fear.

By: B-chan

B-chan — Tue, 02 Sep 2008 02:00:25 +0000

Finally, someone else who believes in mangling, maiming, torturing and otherwise finding an assortment of physical, psychological and emotional trauma to inflict upon one's characters. Personally, I like to slowly assassinate the character then go Hamlet on the whole cast, leaving one or two members of the peanut gallery to wrap things up. B-chans last blog post..Perfect Irony

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By: --Deb

--Deb — Thu, 20 Mar 2008 13:23:27 +0000

I have a real problem causing my characters pain–the ones I like, anyway. But then, I live in my own little sunshine-and-light world anyway and try not to dwell on the negative stuff that I can’t help, which makes writing it convincingly tricky. Just like descriptive passages–those are the ones that my eyes automatically skim over when reading, and so when it comes time to write one, I’m stuck! How can you write something you don’t want to even think about? (“His father has to DIE? But, that’s awful! I can’t do that!”)

–Deb’s last blog post..Match it for Pratchett