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		<title>By: Workshops &#38; reading aloud &#171; Fairfield Writer&#8217;s Blog</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-31036</link>
		<dc:creator>Workshops &#38; reading aloud &#171; Fairfield Writer&#8217;s Blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Dec 2009 18:45:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] blogger named Taylor at the menwithpens.ca website expands on Langewiesche’s idea in a helpful [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Words on a page &#187; Blog Archive &#187; A few links for the end of the week - A blog about writing, in its various forms</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-28892</link>
		<dc:creator>Words on a page &#187; Blog Archive &#187; A few links for the end of the week - A blog about writing, in its various forms</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Sep 2009 12:03:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Best Electric Razors</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-28217</link>
		<dc:creator>Best Electric Razors</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Aug 2009 14:40:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes reading is very important before you finalize any press release or article what ever you are writing. What will happen is when you will read the paragraphs you will be able to know which words are not suitable or where you need to put a comma something like that. And the flow will come after you read for a period of time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes reading is very important before you finalize any press release or article what ever you are writing. What will happen is when you will read the paragraphs you will be able to know which words are not suitable or where you need to put a comma something like that. And the flow will come after you read for a period of time.</p>
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		<title>By: Omar</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-28134</link>
		<dc:creator>Omar</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 00:14:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the article. I tried this technique yesterday and it felt funny. But it is useful. I was thinking reading a loud can improve enunciation and voice projection.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the article. I tried this technique yesterday and it felt funny. But it is useful. I was thinking reading a loud can improve enunciation and voice projection.</p>
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		<title>By: Friday Link Love 8/7 (evening edition) &#124; Brad&#8217;s Reader</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-28128</link>
		<dc:creator>Friday Link Love 8/7 (evening edition) &#124; Brad&#8217;s Reader</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Aug 2009 02:12:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Web Design</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-28120</link>
		<dc:creator>Web Design</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Aug 2009 10:03:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice piece of suggestion. Yes it is better to read loudly to rectify your own mistake. But you allow and share your blog to other critics then you will rectify as soon as possible.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice piece of suggestion. Yes it is better to read loudly to rectify your own mistake. But you allow and share your blog to other critics then you will rectify as soon as possible.</p>
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		<title>By: Erika Martinez</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-28115</link>
		<dc:creator>Erika Martinez</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Aug 2009 21:03:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HAHA. And it seems my eyes skipped over that spelling mistake. I meant read*. How smooth. *_*</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HAHA. And it seems my eyes skipped over that spelling mistake. I meant read*. How smooth. *_*</p>
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		<title>By: Erika Martinez</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-28114</link>
		<dc:creator>Erika Martinez</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Aug 2009 21:01:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Gentlemen, 

Thanks so very much for saying what I&#039;ve said to my students SO MANY TIMES. (Seriously, at least 200 times in a school year.) The difference between good and excellent copy is whether or not the author ready it aloud. There is nothing like hearing the words in use a.k.a. the flow. You can&#039;t get that from silent reading.</description>
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<p>Thanks so very much for saying what I&#8217;ve said to my students SO MANY TIMES. (Seriously, at least 200 times in a school year.) The difference between good and excellent copy is whether or not the author ready it aloud. There is nothing like hearing the words in use a.k.a. the flow. You can&#8217;t get that from silent reading.</p>
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		<title>By: Patrick Vuleta</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-28111</link>
		<dc:creator>Patrick Vuleta</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Aug 2009 11:57:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Or read aloud into a recorder and play it back to yourself. 

Might by a mic headphone for the PC, actually...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Or read aloud into a recorder and play it back to yourself. </p>
<p>Might by a mic headphone for the PC, actually&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Jerry Kolber &#187; Blog Archive &#187; How to Make A Story Flow</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/how-to-add-flow-to-writing/comment-page-1#comment-28110</link>
		<dc:creator>Jerry Kolber &#187; Blog Archive &#187; How to Make A Story Flow</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Aug 2009 11:51:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] at Men With Pens there&#8217;s a great article on how to make your creative writing flow naturally. The main advice [...]</description>
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