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Drive-By Shooting Critiques



Our (infamous) drive-by shooting critiques have been seriously popular with our clients. For several years, we’ve been offering the perfect solution to tell clients what’s not working with their website, blog or web copy so they can fix it and get better performance – fast. They’ve loved the results.

Our drive-by critiques give your website, blog or web copy a serious once-over analysis, no holds barred, picking out problems with precision. They don’t mess around; that’s why they’re called drive-bys. We pull the trigger and tell it like it is, straightforward, straight up, because you don’t have time to waste when it’s clients and sales you’re after. That’s why we get right to the point in a straightforward report – you know exactly what you need to do to improve your business.

Choose our public drive-by and get a $50 discount. We post your critique to our blog, you get a link back to your site, and our readers get to discover your business and service. They’ll even chime in with their own helpful suggestions for improvement! It’s Men with Pens plus community – fantastic.

Go for it. Pick your option and get the drive-by critique that fits your needs best. We think you should always get to call the shots like that.

Website or Blog Critique

We drive by your website or blog and crawl your home page – the most important of all – with a first-time visitor’s perspective and sharpshooter expertise to tell you what people see in your site – and what they should be seeing for more clients or sales. Design, usability, SEO, clarity, appeal, credibility… all in one info-packed report. A steal at just $399 or choose our public blog option and save $50!

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Web Copy or Writing Critique

Concerned your words aren’t converting readers to sales? Not sure about your copy and want some feedback? We crawl over up to 1,000 words of web copy or any other writing and give you bulls-eye suggestions so you can hit the target with your readers. It’s perfect for web copy that’s already live on the web, or for expert feedback on content you’ve written before anyone sees it. A bargain, at only $399 or choose our public blog option and save $50!

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Drive-By Critique Double Shot

Let’s be honest. You don’t know what’s wrong with your site – why should you? That’s not your specialty, and it’s not your job. But it is ours. Hire us for an eagle-eye, double-shot critique and get a full report on your website or blog AND 1,500 words of copy. It’s the best business investment you’ll make this year, designed to help bring you returns. A seriously good deal at only $599, or choose our public blog option and save $50!

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What happens next?

You sit back and relax while we examine your site or copy. Within 7 to 10 days, we send you a complete report and analysis, including our suggestions for improvements. You can make the changes yourself, ask your favorite designer, developer or copywriter to make the fixes, or hire us to get your site back to the performance levels you need.

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