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		<title>By: How to Write a Kick-Ass Review &#124; Men with Pens</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/smartypants-writer/#comment-47212</link>
		<dc:creator>How to Write a Kick-Ass Review &#124; Men with Pens</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 May 2011 14:49:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] your audience, and speak their language. Don&#8217;t explain concepts they already understand, and give them comparisons with other [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Jeannie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeannie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Aug 2010 16:00:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh gosh, I admit, I&#039;m not the best writer but I suppose for me I want to just get the message out there. There are no three dollar words used on my sites at all. 

They say that for the web you should write simply as you say above, the level of a third grader I think it was.

As you say, it is to get your point across and not to sound like a smarty pants. One day, I hope to be one, but then no one will want to listen to what I have to say. He he..</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh gosh, I admit, I&#8217;m not the best writer but I suppose for me I want to just get the message out there. There are no three dollar words used on my sites at all. </p>
<p>They say that for the web you should write simply as you say above, the level of a third grader I think it was.</p>
<p>As you say, it is to get your point across and not to sound like a smarty pants. One day, I hope to be one, but then no one will want to listen to what I have to say. He he..</p>
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		<title>By: 6 Tips To Writing Publicity-Friendly Content &#124; Market Like A Chick</title>
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		<dc:creator>6 Tips To Writing Publicity-Friendly Content &#124; Market Like A Chick</dc:creator>
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		<title>By: How Do You Market Yourself as a Freelancer? &#124; Ajeva</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/smartypants-writer/#comment-33018</link>
		<dc:creator>How Do You Market Yourself as a Freelancer? &#124; Ajeva</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Mar 2010 02:41:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Randy Murray</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/smartypants-writer/#comment-33005</link>
		<dc:creator>Randy Murray</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Mar 2010 18:34:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good advice. 

As copywriters we are not writing for ourselves or to show off our prowess. We write best when we know our audiences and write directly, clearly, and cleanly as one of them.

I trained as a playwright and I find that my writing follows my ear. If I can listen to a subject matter expert in the field, I can find a successful voice to write in. It&#039;s very different from reading what they write, which can be jargon filled and stiff. Hearing them talk about the subject, their experience, and the problems and issues they face makes it so much easier for me to write naturally for the intended audience. 

I feel the most intellectual, the most powerful as a writer, when I completely disappear.
.-= Randy Murray&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://randymurrayonline.com/2010/03/19/writing-assignment-capturing-dialog/&quot;&gt;Writing Assignment: Capturing Dialog&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good advice. </p>
<p>As copywriters we are not writing for ourselves or to show off our prowess. We write best when we know our audiences and write directly, clearly, and cleanly as one of them.</p>
<p>I trained as a playwright and I find that my writing follows my ear. If I can listen to a subject matter expert in the field, I can find a successful voice to write in. It&#8217;s very different from reading what they write, which can be jargon filled and stiff. Hearing them talk about the subject, their experience, and the problems and issues they face makes it so much easier for me to write naturally for the intended audience. </p>
<p>I feel the most intellectual, the most powerful as a writer, when I completely disappear.<br />
.-= Randy Murray&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://randymurrayonline.com/2010/03/19/writing-assignment-capturing-dialog/">Writing Assignment: Capturing Dialog</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Hal Brown</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/smartypants-writer/#comment-33004</link>
		<dc:creator>Hal Brown</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Mar 2010 18:11:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I understand what you&#039;re saying, I think. Writing so the average high school graduate can comprehend without strain is probably a good thing to aim for on a blog, unless it is an academic blog where a higher level is expected.

I don&#039;t see this as a problem. In fact, I recently wrote an article about the awful, nearly unreadable English on numerous blogs these days.
http://www.weblogredux.com/you-are-what-you-write/ 

I believe there is a more serious problem with people who don&#039;t know how to write well enough to effectively communicate. Many of the A-Listers encourage poor writing. The idea is, post often, don&#039;t worry about the writing, just get your content out there every day.

I don&#039;t like the idea of dumbing down communication anymore than it already is. This is not to say that effectual writing has to be dull or pedantic, or make use of ten dollar words. Simply write for your audience, and use the best style of proper English you can.

Thanks for bringing up this subject. And thanks for giving me the opportunity to give my opinion.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I understand what you&#8217;re saying, I think. Writing so the average high school graduate can comprehend without strain is probably a good thing to aim for on a blog, unless it is an academic blog where a higher level is expected.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t see this as a problem. In fact, I recently wrote an article about the awful, nearly unreadable English on numerous blogs these days.<br />
<a href="http://www.weblogredux.com/you-are-what-you-write/" rel="nofollow">http://www.weblogredux.com/you-are-what-you-write/</a> </p>
<p>I believe there is a more serious problem with people who don&#8217;t know how to write well enough to effectively communicate. Many of the A-Listers encourage poor writing. The idea is, post often, don&#8217;t worry about the writing, just get your content out there every day.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t like the idea of dumbing down communication anymore than it already is. This is not to say that effectual writing has to be dull or pedantic, or make use of ten dollar words. Simply write for your audience, and use the best style of proper English you can.</p>
<p>Thanks for bringing up this subject. And thanks for giving me the opportunity to give my opinion.</p>
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		<title>By: Steve St. Clair</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/smartypants-writer/#comment-32505</link>
		<dc:creator>Steve St. Clair</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Feb 2010 02:59:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In the “jeunesse” of my occupation as and essayist, I promptly discerned that my vociferous use of the more brutal forms of our shared idiom made it far more probable that I possess a natural empathy with, dare I say even a benevolence for, the common man. My chosen language is the patois of the everyman. Through this confederacy of like minds, this perspicuous camaraderie, I know that I have never left that “vie quotidienne,” that magnificent humdrum, for the lofty plains of the imagined intellectual.
.-= Steve St. Clair&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://ionleap.com/2010/01/strategy-driven-content-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-92&quot;&gt;By: Content writing – somethin’ on &#124; IonLeap - SEO fails without Blog Writer Team&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In the “jeunesse” of my occupation as and essayist, I promptly discerned that my vociferous use of the more brutal forms of our shared idiom made it far more probable that I possess a natural empathy with, dare I say even a benevolence for, the common man. My chosen language is the patois of the everyman. Through this confederacy of like minds, this perspicuous camaraderie, I know that I have never left that “vie quotidienne,” that magnificent humdrum, for the lofty plains of the imagined intellectual.<br />
.-= Steve St. Clair&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://ionleap.com/2010/01/strategy-driven-content-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-92">By: Content writing – somethin’ on | IonLeap &#8211; SEO fails without Blog Writer Team</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: David</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/smartypants-writer/#comment-32145</link>
		<dc:creator>David</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Feb 2010 19:58:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When it comes to copywriters, sometimes the less you know, the more you can appeal to the common man. You have to sometimes make sure you don&#039;t get too close to the business to be able to write about them in a way that people understand and not get caught up in the jargon.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When it comes to copywriters, sometimes the less you know, the more you can appeal to the common man. You have to sometimes make sure you don&#8217;t get too close to the business to be able to write about them in a way that people understand and not get caught up in the jargon.</p>
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		<title>By: Weekend Reading: My Fav&#8217;s From This Week 1/29/10 &#124; Heather Villa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Weekend Reading: My Fav&#8217;s From This Week 1/29/10 &#124; Heather Villa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jan 2010 21:07:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Writing Roundup, January 29 &#171; Uncategorized &#171; Jen&#39;s Writing Journey</title>
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		<dc:creator>Writing Roundup, January 29 &#171; Uncategorized &#171; Jen&#39;s Writing Journey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jan 2010 18:04:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Are You Trying to Be too Smart? Over at Men with Pens, Taylor discusses the need to continue to hone our crafts and our vocabularies, but also to keep our copy from sounding too academic or stilted. [...]</description>
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