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	<title>Comments on: Why You Should Write At Elementary School Levels</title>
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		<title>By: Joe Bulger</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-35239</link>
		<dc:creator>Joe Bulger</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Jul 2010 12:31:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>James, I love good copy - stuff that roles off the tongue that any 4th grader could grasp.

As you already know, the web is perfect for good copy and will punish anything that can&#039;t be easily consumed like popcorn at a movie.

Joe :D</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>James, I love good copy &#8211; stuff that roles off the tongue that any 4th grader could grasp.</p>
<p>As you already know, the web is perfect for good copy and will punish anything that can&#8217;t be easily consumed like popcorn at a movie.</p>
<p>Joe <img src='http://menwithpens.ca/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Simplicity for Writers of All Types &#124; Men With Pens</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-25453</link>
		<dc:creator>Simplicity for Writers of All Types &#124; Men With Pens</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Mar 2009 18:10:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] been said that my writing is of a very basic level. I don&#8217;t use big words and I use language that almost anyone can read and understand easily. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] been said that my writing is of a very basic level. I don&#8217;t use big words and I use language that almost anyone can read and understand easily. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: TrishaLyn</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-1917</link>
		<dc:creator>TrishaLyn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Jan 2008 03:11:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@James..

Noooo by no means was I implying that you&#039;re not about quality.  This is a great blog... I guess I stuck my foot in my mouth on that one.  Sorry!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@James..</p>
<p>Noooo by no means was I implying that you&#8217;re not about quality.  This is a great blog&#8230; I guess I stuck my foot in my mouth on that one.  Sorry!</p>
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		<title>By: Harry</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-1920</link>
		<dc:creator>Harry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jan 2008 15:44:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have a few books  I wish I had never bought, too. Genius is no indication of quality. I&#039;ve worked with many people over the years who were incredibly intelligent, quite possibly geniuses, but their smarts often got in the way of common sense and courtesy.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have a few books  I wish I had never bought, too. Genius is no indication of quality. I&#8217;ve worked with many people over the years who were incredibly intelligent, quite possibly geniuses, but their smarts often got in the way of common sense and courtesy.</p>
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		<title>By: Opal Tribble - Addicted To Writing</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-1923</link>
		<dc:creator>Opal Tribble - Addicted To Writing</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jan 2008 11:11:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I try to keep it simple. I don&#039;t know the background of my readers, and I&#039;m trying to reach as many as possible. The majority of my websites are ranked at the elementary level.  I did that purposely.  There are some people are turned off by those who use a lot of big words.  They view them as pompous of course that isn&#039;t always true. On my websites I thought about the impression I wanted to convey I make it as user friendly as possible

My newest website, Addicted to Writing, is at the junior high level; however, my alternative healing website is ranked at the college level. Some of the terms I use cannot be avoided. However, I always explain what they mean.

James, you have a quality website. Just because a website is ranked higher doesn&#039;t mean its quality.  I have a few books in my possession that I wish I had never bought, but I know they would rank high because of the words used. :-) The content on here is simple and concise you try not to leave anyone out. I like that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I try to keep it simple. I don&#8217;t know the background of my readers, and I&#8217;m trying to reach as many as possible. The majority of my websites are ranked at the elementary level.  I did that purposely.  There are some people are turned off by those who use a lot of big words.  They view them as pompous of course that isn&#8217;t always true. On my websites I thought about the impression I wanted to convey I make it as user friendly as possible</p>
<p>My newest website, Addicted to Writing, is at the junior high level; however, my alternative healing website is ranked at the college level. Some of the terms I use cannot be avoided. However, I always explain what they mean.</p>
<p>James, you have a quality website. Just because a website is ranked higher doesn&#8217;t mean its quality.  I have a few books in my possession that I wish I had never bought, but I know they would rank high because of the words used. <img src='http://menwithpens.ca/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />  The content on here is simple and concise you try not to leave anyone out. I like that.</p>
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		<title>By: James</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-1910</link>
		<dc:creator>James</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jan 2008 01:20:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Uhh... I hope you&#039;re not implying that we&#039;re not about quality...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Uhh&#8230; I hope you&#8217;re not implying that we&#8217;re not about quality&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: TrishaLyn</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-1909</link>
		<dc:creator>TrishaLyn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jan 2008 01:19:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>See, I&#039;ve come to love and appreciate my genius level blog.  Quality is important to me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>See, I&#8217;ve come to love and appreciate my genius level blog.  Quality is important to me.</p>
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		<title>By: James</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-1922</link>
		<dc:creator>James</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Dec 2007 10:16:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ Jen - Hm, very true. Print is one thing, screen is another. Thanks for the pat on the back!

@ Cindy - Ha, I wish *people* would take this advice, not just corporate writers and bloggers!

@ Sunny - My biggest challenge was unlearning the double space after a period.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ Jen &#8211; Hm, very true. Print is one thing, screen is another. Thanks for the pat on the back!</p>
<p>@ Cindy &#8211; Ha, I wish *people* would take this advice, not just corporate writers and bloggers!</p>
<p>@ Sunny &#8211; My biggest challenge was unlearning the double space after a period.</p>
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		<title>By: Cindy Dashnaw</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-1919</link>
		<dc:creator>Cindy Dashnaw</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Dec 2007 04:01:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hear hear! I just wish more corporate writers, not just bloggers, would take this advice. Readers who want to work when they read will pick up a copy of &quot;Ulysses&quot; -- they won&#039;t make the effort to read a blog, a company Web site or a corporate brochure.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hear hear! I just wish more corporate writers, not just bloggers, would take this advice. Readers who want to work when they read will pick up a copy of &#8220;Ulysses&#8221; &#8212; they won&#8217;t make the effort to read a blog, a company Web site or a corporate brochure.</p>
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		<title>By: Jen / domestika</title>
		<link>http://menwithpens.ca/why-you-should-write-at-elementary-school-levels/#comment-1918</link>
		<dc:creator>Jen / domestika</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Dec 2007 04:00:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Back in the print world, my colleagues and I aim at a grade 9 level in order to make a document accessible to the majority of readers without alienating those at the upper end of the literacy scale.  Add the physical challenges of reading on a screen instead of a paper page, and it only makes sense to scale back a few grades. So, you must be writing right!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Back in the print world, my colleagues and I aim at a grade 9 level in order to make a document accessible to the majority of readers without alienating those at the upper end of the literacy scale.  Add the physical challenges of reading on a screen instead of a paper page, and it only makes sense to scale back a few grades. So, you must be writing right!</p>
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